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A True Navy Poem-let me know what you think  posted: 04/01/05 at 7:58 PM
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Here is a poem i just made. I hope you can all relate to it in some way.
Standing in the frozen terminal, I prepare for it again.
His blue embroidered Navy bag is resting at my feet.
Tightly placed inside I set a secret note,
To remind him of the everlasting love we share.
His shoes are freshly polished,
And his pants neatly pressed by mother,
As we sit sharing hands, I remind myself to breathe
“Now boarding seating area 2”
I hear a voice echoing in my mind as he rises from waiting.
My heart stops beating and I sense the tears forming.
His broad hand reaches for his bag,
As it lightly brushes my leg.
I am quickly reminded of last night’s warmth,
And the promises we made.
He helps my weak knees stand as we both try not to cry.
He whispers his love to me as we securely embrace.
I remind myself to stay strong,
Because he needs the support.
So I straighten his hat and fight back the tears,
Give him a tender kiss, as he heads for the tunnel doors.
He gives me one last wink as I slowly melt inside.
I realize I will never stop loving my Navy man,
He is devoted, strong and filled with pride
(I love you Doug)
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(~*~*Lauren S.*~*~)
Last edited by happygrl812 on 04/01/05 at 10:55 PM
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posted: 04/02/05 at 7:16 PM
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| Aww..I love that! My boyfriend is in the Navy and that poem just reminded me of exactly how I feel when he leaves, but how much I love him and can't wait to see him again!!!! Thanks for that =)
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*I love my sailor*
"To think I might not see those eyes,
Makes it so hard not to cry,
And as we say our long good-bye,
I nearly do"
- IMU Brian and I love you!
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posted: 05/01/05 at 5:28 PM
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| that is by far one of th best poems ive ever heard.. thanks for sharing it with us!
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so close your eyes and sleep to dream
im by your side no words to speak
we'll set our course and make it through
no matter how far you go
no matter how much this hurts
i want you to know my heart remains with you
*i love my soldier* =)
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posted: 05/19/05 at 5:57 AM
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Lauren,
I think everyone who has a loved one that has walked away at at terminal can relate and those who have not can only imagine. It brought me back when Jason left for Iraq...that was the hardest thing I ever had to do and I think now we have to just wait and remember that the best thing in the world will be to see them walking back towards us!!
Thanks for sharing, it was wonderful.
God bless,
Catherine
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"Missing my Marine so much I can hardly breathe!"
He is coming home in two weeks 
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posted: 07/03/05 at 3:16 AM
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Great poem! I too am a girlfriend of a Navy boy. My boyfriend is actually a USNA grad (class of 2004). If you ever need any information or someone to talk to feel free to message or e-mail me! I'd love to talk!
-Lauren 
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 posted: 07/29/05 at 6:40 PM
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| Im a soon to be wife of a Army man, but I must say this poem is truly beautiful! Keep up the great work with your poems, I hope to read over more of your work soon!
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~Vonnie~
I pray oh Lord our soldiers you keep, hold them all safe in your arms. And ward off those whom would do them harm!
~I love you Hun, come home safe and sound~
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posted: 08/07/05 at 5:39 AM
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| I love that! That brought tears to my eyes! My fiance is in the navy and our wedding is in 3 weeks and it made me think about all those times he had to leave for a month here and 2 months and 3 weeks there and now he's getting ready to leave for a long deployment and its going to be really hard but ill love him still and more
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posted: 08/21/05 at 9:26 AM
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| Thats so beautiful!!! and so true!!! I'm a navy GF. I live in Australia though so I am very far away from him. haven't been able to talk to him in weeks and won't be able to see him till next year...any advice. you guys are such a wonderful support ands ound like really beautiful people!
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I'll be right here waiting
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posted: 09/04/05 at 10:38 PM
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Hey my name is Kailey, and I was just browsing around this website when I noticed your poem && your adorable picture. It reminds me of me and my boyfriend of one year & half. He just left for the NAVY July 27th. So this is all new to me, but I miss him so much, and thats exactly how i felt when he left. I had to watch him elave with his last wink goodbye. I'm 16 & he's 18. I really love your poem, I just thought I'd comment.
-Kailey
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