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A Candle at Night posted: 04/08/08 at 12:01 AM

Juzjon  [more]
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A Candle at Night


Dazzle me with azure eyes
thrill me with red lips
Touch me with your soft pink hands
sway your rounded hips

Toss your golden curly hair
gently on my chest
Move it slowly back and forth
as we begin the rest

Taunt me with your womanhood
tease me with delight
Take me to that hidden cove
we visit every night

Put your arms around me
hold me oh so close
Whisper that you love me
let me overdose

I give you me completely
I am at your command
A slave to you unselfishly
beginning to expand

Kiss me softly on the neck
and then behind my ear
Run your nails across my back
evoke my trusting fear

Thrust your body on me
then quickly pull away
Lying there by candle light
my woman on display

Cast me to your ocean
throw me to your shore
Take me deep beneath your sea
allow me to explore

The pureness of your waters
those tides of salty brine
Which ebb and flow
as if though,
erotic and divine

My hands rest on your stomach
which soon begins to shake
The gratitude of giving
entice a seismic quake

The beauty of just knowing
a female rhapsody
Is only the beginning
of what is yet to be

One in to each other
a cadence we commence
Into volcanic lava flow
a feeling so intense

We grip each other tightly
a candle's burning out
Fall fast asleep in to the night
satisfied, no doubt

by Juzjon

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posted: 04/09/08 at 12:04 AM

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That was great!!!!! I know a couple other sensual rhyming poets you might like.. on a different site! This was my favorite stanza "Cast me to your ocean throw me to your shore Take me deep beneath your sea allow me to explore" will be checking your profile to see what else you have in rhyme! Beautiful and erotic!

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posted: 04/09/08 at 12:29 AM

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my writing sometimes get me aroused, what can I say? So
I'll just say "thanks"

Juz

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posted: 04/10/08 at 10:45 PM

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That was incredible!!!!

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posted: 04/10/08 at 11:28 PM

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Thank you susan1

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posted: 04/12/08 at 11:58 PM

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that was great thanks

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posted: 05/02/08 at 4:55 AM

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Bravo!!! I like this poem hope to see more from you.

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